Link to my elevator pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oOw1Ni6sdJM
The feedback on my last post was very positive and encouraging, and it was nice to see that others see the value in my offering! From the feedback I received, I learned that people love seeing my passion for the idea that I've refined over this time period, and that they believe I am off to a good start.
Based on the feedback that I was given, I decided to play around more with the wording of the pitch to see what works best and which is most convincing to consumers. I also tried to uphold the same passion that others noticed the last time around because it seemed to be effective.
McKenna, to start this is definitely your best elevator pitch yet. You had clear and concise ideas that are explained greatly. It also was very nice to see the passion and enthusiasm for your project. It makes it a lot easier for people to want to listen to people who are actually passionate about what they are talking about. I felt your pitch was pretty persuasive for customers as they could see the benefits that you offered.
ReplyDeleteHi Mckenna, I definitely agree with the previous feedback regarding your passion. That is definitely my biggest flaw but definitely has the greatest affect on your ability to sell your idea. Not only does passion make your audience engaged, they are more likely to believe in what you say and your product. I think altering the words of your pitch to find what is most convincing is a great start, and the practice of flexibility will allow you to better fine tune your pitch for different audiences.
ReplyDeleteHey McKenna! It is so clear the passion and excitement you have for your company in this elevator pitch. Your passion made the audience feel really connected to your idea and made me feel like I have faith in your product offering because you seem so deeply connected to your business. You did a great job and I can not wait to see what you do in the future!
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