Here is the link to my elevator pitch on YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rokiyqTAEyU
I was unable to submit my last elevator pitch, so I didn't really have any feedback to go off of, but I did about three takes of this pitch to perfect it to make the pitch more linear and easier to follow. I found that at first I was a little bit all over the place and frazzled, so by making an outline and practicing in the mirror before filming, I was able to get it down and convey the message I intended. I wish I had been able to submit the first one to gain more valuable feedback from my peers!
Love your elevator pitch. You’re a natural in front of the camera. I liked how you listed the features and benefits of the product. I also want to use your helpful website since I have all kinds of crazy skin allergies. If you list all the natural, easy to pronounce (and understand) ingredients, like you said you will do, I think you’re really on to something. I need as few ingredients as possible while still receiving a particular benefit. I think there are a lot of people out there like me. Guys and girls both. Way to go!
ReplyDeleteHey McKenna! I love how you really let your personality shine through during your elevator pitch. Additionally, I love how you specifically listed all of the benefits of your product and the specific features in order to further attract your audience to your product offering. I am very into natural beauty products and your business idea sounds like something I would be really excited to try!
ReplyDeleteHey McKenna, even though you didn't have a first elevator pitch you surely made it seem like you had great feedback. Your tone, passion, and enthusiasm for the subject at hand really makes listening to you easy! I think it was great too include so many benefits from your product and going into detail of what you plan on doing for a website. Great job!
ReplyDeleteHey McKenna, I loved your elevator pitch! It is impressive how you were able to do so well considering you didn't have feedback from your first take. I understand having to try multiple takes to attempt the video. It honestly took me about 4 tries for me to get it down. Great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Mckenna, I loved your pitch and how engaged you were with your audience. I liked how you even showed a product, it makes it much better to watch. I think the progression of the pitch was great and it was not at all over the place or confusing
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